Kia ora Levi, my name is Elle and I’m from the Summer Learning Journey.
Ka pai! Well done, this is a great example of a positive, thoughtful and helpful comment on another student’s blog! I really like that you’ve included what you liked the most about their post and introduced yourself! I also really like that you’ve asked them a question. This is a great way to start a conversation, because when they reply, you can have a back and forth discussion about the activity and create a comment thread! Great work, and I’m sure that Tuatahi really appreciated your comment too.
For next time, it would be awesome if you included a link to Tuatahi’s blog, so that we can see the post you commented on and the work that they’ve done. Otherwise, great job!
Keep up the great work Levi, and I look forward to seeing more of your blog posts over the summer! I have included a link to the Summer Learning Journey blog here so that you can see the 2020/2021 activities that you will need to complete in order to be eligible to receive points and win prizes. It would be great to see you doing more of these activities, because you did such a great job on this one!
Kia ora Levi, my name is Elle and I’m from the Summer Learning Journey.
ReplyDeleteKa pai! Well done, this is a great example of a positive, thoughtful and helpful comment on another student’s blog! I really like that you’ve included what you liked the most about their post and introduced yourself! I also really like that you’ve asked them a question. This is a great way to start a conversation, because when they reply, you can have a back and forth discussion about the activity and create a comment thread! Great work, and I’m sure that Tuatahi really appreciated your comment too.
For next time, it would be awesome if you included a link to Tuatahi’s blog, so that we can see the post you commented on and the work that they’ve done. Otherwise, great job!
Keep up the great work Levi, and I look forward to seeing more of your blog posts over the summer! I have included a link to the Summer Learning Journey blog here so that you can see the 2020/2021 activities that you will need to complete in order to be eligible to receive points and win prizes. It would be great to see you doing more of these activities, because you did such a great job on this one!
Mā te wā
Elle (SLJ)
Hi Levi its Isaiah from room 23 I really like your comment its also kinda funny but its cool.
ReplyDelete~Isaiah😁~