Commenting for Ako Hiko's Summer Learning Journey

 

Proofreading my Sina and the Eel writing

 

Here is my Sina and the Eel story ending.  When I proofread it I used capital letters at the start of new sentences. I put speech marks at the beginning and the end of when people speak. I used question marks and exclamation marks. I did a spell check.

I really want to write the beginning of the story now.

Make sure you proofread your stories before you post them?

Do you proofread your stories?

Summer Leasing journey

 This is my summer Leasing journey activity. bye see you later😁😁😁

Lost and found

This is about the lost and found. it was a challenge but I guess it was fun. bye see you later😅😅😅😅

Duffy book performan

 I really like the pet name Milly  the coggen it was my coggen favorite performer because it was funny.

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Lost and Found

This my favorite writing. It about lost and found  and it was a little bit challenging . Bye see you later.

 I went on a scuba diving trip and we went to an Island name Niue. It was so amazing. We were on the boat and we were nearly there. We have made it to the place. it's time to scuba dive into the water and we can breathe in  the water. We were so panicked to go underwater it was a little too deep so we went underwater.we saw a Statue underwater but we were using flippers to push us underwater. we m it to the deep end of the water and we saw a statue.

In the Beginning

 I used the online voice recorder the story about the beginning. It was a bit fun.

Don't be so toxic from Levi Carlos and Christian

 

We have been looking at what you do when things go wrong on the internet.  Ignore  block and screenshot.

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Hundertwasser art

 

Hi my name is Levi from room 7.  My art was a challenge for me. The hard part is the rainbow. Bye see you next time. 

I am Levi

 

The Discovery

Hi my name Levi is from room 7

it was a challenge for me it was a bit hard to describe it. The challenge is put a simile in.

The mammoth was walking on the bright snow. The bones were  cracking from the cold. It was foggy in the enormous cold hill. The mammoth was trying to find food for him and he found a sharp rock on the dark green grass.